Student Films. PeepHole

The font and colour of the fonts fit the genre of thriller and appear with good speed and are well presented so they don't obscure the scene.
The non-diegetic sound is very effective and really helps set an amposphere to the piece.
The diegetic sound gets lost and i find its not very clear and easy to understand.
Also the due to the fad to black transitions the clip has a more of a trailor feel and to much of the plot is revealed.
To improve i would add smoother transitions and have more of an open plot to engage the viewer.